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The setting affects the mood in my book in a certain way. But, my book doesnt have that much of a setting to it. It doesn't really explain the setting that much. but in one part that i'm at, Alfred is in Europe and he is by the stone henge. 100's of miles from home.It's really late in the night and milldew is in the grass, while Alfred is running through the grass is makes like swoosh-swoosh noises. Maybe, because the wet drops are running along the bottoms of his pants. Now that i went off subject, let's just get back on subject. The mood of the book is really suspencful. It makes you feel like your in the book, right there by the characters. Seeing everything that is happening to and around them. 

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The main character has a certain motivation in this book. Alfred's motivation is to fix all the mistakes he made and get the Excalibur back from the hands of evil. OIPEP is offering over 100 billion dollars for the return of the Excalibur. Alfred has many weird dreams, in which he thinks that he is suppose to be the owner of the sword and The Lady of The Lake is in his dream apparently. The conclusion of it all so far is that Alfred has to work with alot of different people and is having alot of trouble trying to fix the problems he made.

[Post:1] The Adventures of Alfred Kropp by: Rick Yancey

August 30, 2010
There is a great conflict in my book The Adventures of Alfred Kropp. The Excalibur is stolen by Alfred and his uncle and traded it for a million dollars. But the buyer(Mr. Myers) took the sword from Alfred and killed his uncle with it and Alfred is short a million dollars.