Thursday, September 16, 2010

[Post:1] The Adventures of Alfred Kropp by: Rick Yancey

August 30, 2010
There is a great conflict in my book The Adventures of Alfred Kropp. The Excalibur is stolen by Alfred and his uncle and traded it for a million dollars. But the buyer(Mr. Myers) took the sword from Alfred and killed his uncle with it and Alfred is short a million dollars.

1 comment:

  1. Good, Aaron. Don't forget to highlight the statement, proper nouns or numbers, and conclusion.

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